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Jack and his friends were at a party.
“I’m going out for a smoke.” said Jack.
5 min later his friend Jeff said “Come on Jack lets go”
“Wait let me finish,” replied Jack
“No let's go,” his friends all said
Jack drops the smoke on the ground but little did Jack know he dropped his lit cigarette on leaking gas and that's how it all started.
The people rushed out of the building like their lives depended on it, which it did and as Jack was sprinting out, the guilt was getting heavier and heavier until he saw every won was out but he still had a lot of guilt because he didn't know for a fact. Be four you knew it there was smoke everywhere and the sirens were making more and more intense.
As soon as Jack got home he went to bed and he was having an anxiety attack then he jumped straight out of bed and jumped in his car and took off into town. He heard it all over the radio. As soon as he got off the motorway he saw a big black cloud and he was hoping it wasn't .the fire he started. When he got to the scene he saw heaps of cops and ambulances and even more fire trucks. He asked won of the police men “do you no what caused the big fire” the policeman said “no but we are working on it. He was going to say I did it but instead he said good luck because he thought he would get arrested.
1 week later Jack got a call from the police they said
“Can you please com down to the police station in auckland city you are a suspect.”
Jack said i'll be there in 30 min”
When Jack arrives at the police station he was asked to go on in the question room. There was a camera and two police guards and a guy with a whole lot of paper in his hand.
After the questioning he got charged with saying false evidence and burning down a building, of course, so he had to go to jail for 1 year.
hello levi its Clinton from your class
ReplyDeletei really like your poem or writing what ever it is like i said i really liked it but next time can you add more color and things like that bye
Ki ora bro/levi
ReplyDeleteits Patrick from your school this story is well written but there are a few spelling mistakes but its fine its still a good story im impressed.
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Kia Ora,Levi
ReplyDeleteIt's Arpit I Really Liked your writing the dialogue was really well done and was really a great addition to the writing. Maybe next time you could research stuff like how long you would actually go to jail for and add in the real time.What was your Inspiration for the writing?
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